去年老师让我们参加一个作文竞赛,两个班一共100多个学生,选来选去,少有让他满意的。最后他从100多份作文中选出了4篇参加最后的竞赛,很幸运的是,我就是其中的一个。
Last year, our teacher asked us to take part in a composition contest. There are more than 100 students in two classes. Few of them are satisfied with their choice. In the end, he chose 4 of more than 100 compositions to participate in the final competition. Fortunately, I was one of them.
老师的思路,谁让我们以小见大。通过家庭的变化来折射出祖国建设的一日千里,来反映时代的巨变。他让我写我爸爸的座骑的变化。我的爸爸原来上班骑自行车,后来家里攒了一些钱,鸟枪换炮,换了一个轻骑摩托,再后来我的爸爸妈妈经营超市,做面点加工手里的积蓄更多了,就买了一辆五菱之光小面包轿车。爸爸的坐骑水涨船高,我们家的生活也芝麻开花。
Teacher's thinking, who let us see big in small. Through the changes of family, we can reflect the rapid development of the motherland and the great changes of the times. He asked me to write about my dad's ride changes. My father used to ride a bicycle at work, but later my family saved some money, changed guns, changed a light bike, and then my father and mother ran a supermarket, making more savings in pasta processing, and bought a Wuling light bun car. My father's ride is going up, and my family's life is blooming.
我精心修改了许多遍,原来的稿件,改的体无完肤。段落句子标点,每改一遍都要精益求精。可是熟料呢,交上去的4篇,只有我的同桌儿榜上有名,荣获省级二等奖。老师不仅给他颁发了一个大红的荣誉证书,还自掏腰包从网上给他买了一套《基督山伯爵》作为奖品。
I have carefully revised many times. The original manuscript has been completely revised. Punctuation of paragraphs and sentences should be improved every time you change them. But for the clinker, only my deskmate was listed in the 4 articles handed in, and won the provincial second prize. The teacher not only gave him a red certificate of honor, but also bought him a set of "count of Monte Cristo" as a prize from the Internet at his own expense.
我的那个羡慕嫉妒恨啦,同样参加比赛,老师就不能给我们这些没有获奖的学生一点小小的安慰吗?参加比赛落榜,已经使得我的小心灵受到很大伤害了,您哪怕块儿八毛给我们买一个笔和本儿也行啊,这样厚此薄彼怎么行呢?
My envy, jealousy and hatred, also participate in the competition, can't the teacher give us a little comfort to the students who haven't won the prize? It has hurt my little heart to fail in the competition. Even if you buy us a pen and a notebook, how can you do that?
不过说是说笑是笑,如果再有类似的活动,我还会积极参加,万一要获奖了呢。
But it's joking or laughing. If there is another similar activity, I will actively participate in it, in case of winning the prize.