自我评价 (self-evaluation) 是一种对自己进行评估、反思和总结的行为,它对个人的成长和发展有重要的作用。一个人如果能够客观地认识和评价自己,就能正确地对待和处理生活和学习中的问题以及和他人的关系,并能扬长避短,让自己变得更好。某校以“正确评价自己”为主题,在学生中开展征文活动,请你写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容包括:
1. your idea about yourself;
2. an experience you evaluated yourself correctly;
3. your understanding of self-evaluation.
要求:
1. 词数不少于80;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
参考例文:
Everyone should have a clear understanding of themselves. As for me, I think I'm a caring and thoughtful girl who always puts myself in others' shoes. I always think about others’ feelings and needs when dealing with problems. Actually, I was a bit selfish two years ago.
I still remember what happened after the final exam of Grade 7. I thought I did very well after the exam. So I couldn't wait to check answers with my best friend. I kept talking about the answers so excitedly that I didn't notice the expressions on her face. Suddenly, she shouted at me and ran away. Just then, I realized I was not caring and thoughtful enough. It was always one of my shortcomings. Therefore, I made up my mind to improve myself. Later, I said sorry to my friend and began to think more about others. So I have more close friends.
From this experience, I realized the importance of self-evaluation. We should have a proper and objective evaluation of ourselves. Not only can it help us a lot with our studies and lives, but it can also make us learn from mistakes and get better and better.
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文为一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:要点内容已给出,注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你对自己的看法;
第二步,讲述你正确评价自己的经历;
第三步,介绍你对自我评价的理解。
[亮点词汇]
① put oneself in others’ shoes 设身处地为别人着想
② deal with 处理
③ make up one’s mind 下定决心
[高分句型]
① As for me, I think I’m a caring and thoughtful girl who always puts myself in others’ shoes. (宾语从句;who引导的定语从句)
② I kept talking about the answers so excitedly that I didn’t notice the expressions on her face. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)