【写作要求】
亲爱的同学们，课余时间、周末、假期，你们通常都是怎样度过的呢？请以“MyFree Time”为题，写一篇短文。
信息提示：1. 参加运动，强身健体；2. 娱乐活动，放松心情；3. 做家务，帮助父母；
4. 课外阅读，开拓视野。
要点：1. 根据信息提示，把握要点，适当发挥，不逐字翻译。
2. 文中不得出现真实人名或校名。
3. 词数为80-100。文章的开头已给出，但不计人总词数。
【优秀满分范文】
My Free Time
我的课余时光
I have lots of things to do in myfree time.
课余时分，我总有许多事可做。
Usually I take exercise afterschool so that I can keep healthy and study better. Sometimes I listen to themusic for a while, which is a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help myparents with the housework at the weekends too. When I get tired, I would liketo sit by the balcony and read books such as a novel, a science fiction, oreven a poem. Reading calms my heart down and satisfies my hunger for knowledge.
放学后我常会运动锻炼，既能保持健康，也能让学习更高效。有时我也会听一会儿音乐，这是让自己放松的好方法。当然，周末我还会帮父母做些家务。感到疲倦时，我喜欢坐在阳台边，读一本书——可能是小说、科幻故事，甚至是一首诗。阅读让我的心静下来，也满足了我对知识的渴望。
I love my free time because Ienjoy the freedom.
我喜爱我的自由时光，因为我享受这份自在。
专家解析：
结构：采用“总—分—总”结构，开头总述，中间分点展开，结尾抒发感受。
要点覆盖：依次回应运动、娱乐、家务、阅读四大提示，并通过“so that”“which is”等连接逻辑。
语言亮点：使用“calms my heart down”“satisfies my hunger for knowledge”等生动表达。
改进空间：部分表达可更自然（如“listen to the music”冠词可删），句式可更多样。
作文地带优化重写范文：
My Free Time
I have plenty of things to enjoy during my free time.
To stay healthy, I often do sports like basketball or jogging after school. It helps me feel energetic and focus better on studies. When I need to relax, I usually listen to music or watch interesting videos online. At weekends, I also try to help my parents with housework, such as cleaning or cooking, which makes me feel more responsible. Besides, I spend quiet hours reading books. Novels and science books are my favorites—they not only open my mind but also bring me to different worlds.
In short, my free time is both meaningful and enjoyable. It allows me to learn, relax, and grow.
优化说明：
将“take exercise”改为更自然的“do sports”，并补充运动项目示例。
调整句式结构，增加“such as”“besides”等过渡词，使行文更连贯。
将阅读部分拓展为“open my mind”“bring me to different worlds”，更贴合“开拓视野”的要求。
结尾强调“meaningful and enjoyable”，深化主题。
全文保持口语化流畅表达，词数控制在90词左右，适合学习模仿。
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