写作要求:
某机器人制造公司正在研发一款辅助师生教与学的机器人。该公司征集客户需求与设计创意,先通过互联网开展题为“Classroom Robot”的英语征文活动。请按照以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
要点:
1)Classroom Robot将对我们的教与学带来巨大的变化;
2)你期待Classroom Robot能够做些什么;
3)你对Classroom Robot期待的心情。
要求:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)词数100左右。
Classroom Robot 教学机器人
Classroom robots will come to our classroom. What good news! It will influence our teaching and learning greatly.
教学机器人将来到我们的教室。多么好的消息!它将极大地影响我们的日常教学和学习。
In my opinion, I hope the classroom robots can help us in these ways.
在我看来,我希望课堂机器人能在这些方面帮助我们。
First, I hope the classroom robots can mark our homework and collect our mistakes quickly so that our teachers can be more relaxed.
首先,我希望教学机器人能快速标记我们的作业并收集我们的日常错误,这样我们的老师就能更轻松点。
Second, the classroom robots are also expected to collect our problems for our teachers, because not every student is brave enough to communicate with teachers often. What's more, I hope classroom robots can play with us between classes.
其次,教学机器人也被期望为我们的老师收集我们的问题,因为并不是每个学生都有足够的勇气经常与老师交流。更重要的是,我期待课堂(教学)机器人能在课间和我们一起互动。
How I hope classroom robots can come to my classroom as soon as possible. I'm looking forward to that day.
我多么希望教学机器人能尽快来到我的教室。我期待着那一天的到来。
【总体分析】
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为一般现在时和一般将来时;
③ 提示:根据提示信息介绍Classroom Robot,适当增加细节。
【写作步骤】
第一步,引出话题,介绍Classroom Robot将对我们的教与学带来巨大的变化;
第二步,你期待Classroom Robot能够做些什么;
第三步,你对Classroom Robot期待的心情。
【亮点词汇】
① in my opinion:在我看来,我的观点;
② communicate with sb:和某人交流;
③ as soon as possible:一……就 (尽快)
【高分句型】
【高分句型一】 What good news!(感叹句)
如:What good news it is for me to hear that my brother has got his visa to America!
对我来说,听到弟弟拿到去美国的签证该是多好的消息啊!
【高分句型二】 I hope the Classroom robots can mark our homework and collect our mistakes quickly so that our teachers can be more relaxed.
(省略that的宾语从句以及so that引导的目的状语从句)
【高分句型三】
In my opinion,I hope that the classroom robots can help us in these ways.
翻译:在我看来,我希望课堂机器人可以在这些方面帮助我们。
分析:句子中应用了that引导的宾语从句。
【高分句型四】
Second,the classroom robots are also expected to collect our problems for our teachers,because not every student is brave enough to communicate with teachers often.
分析:句子中应用了because引导的原因状语从句。
范文二:
某国际机器人制造公司正研发一款辅助师生教与学的机器人。该公司征集客户需求与设计创意,先通过互联网开展题为"Classroom Robot"的英语征文活动。请你根据内容要点,写一篇文章投稿。
内容包括:
(1)你认为Classroom Robot对教学带来的利与弊(至少各一点);
(2)你期待Classroom Robot能够做什么?(至少两点)
(3)你期待你的课堂有Classroom Robot吗?
作文要求:
(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,词数80个词左右。作文开头已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄在答题卡上。
Classroom Robot What will happen if we have classroom robots in our classrooms?_________________
Classroom Robot范文:
What will happen if we have classroom robots in our classrooms?
如果我们的教室里有教学机器人,会发生什么?(亦可翻译为:当教学机器人走进我们的教室,将会发生什么?)
I think there will be advantages and disadvantages.On the one hand,if the classroom robots can help teachers with some non-teaching work,our teachers will have more time to think how to teach well.On the other hand,if the classroom robots tell the students answers directly,some students may become lazy.(对教学带来的利与弊)
我认为会各有利弊。一方面,如果课堂(教学)机器人能够帮助教师完成一些非教学工作,我们的教师将有更多的时间思考如何教好学生。另一方面,如果课堂机器人直接告诉学生答案,一些学生可能会变得慵懒。
I hope the classroom robots can mark our homework and quickly collect our mistakes,so that our teachers can spend more time teaching what we don't understand. I also hope that classroom robots can collect our questions for our teachers,because we don't have enough time to talk with teachers.(期待Classroom Robot能够做什么)
我希望教学机器人能够批改我们的作业,快速收集我们的错误,这样我们的老师就可以花更多的时间教我们不懂的东西。我也希望课堂机器人能为我们的老师收集我们的问题,因为我们没有足够的时间与老师面对面交谈。
I look forward to having a classroom robot in my classroom.
我期待着在我的教室里有一个教学机器人。
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