写作高分策略:简单句变复杂句

2023-01-02英语作文

学生仅运用基础的词汇和基本的句型,不能体现出较强的语言运用能力,即使表达无语法错误,也不能得高分~学会把简单句改写成复杂句,不但让内容看起来饱满了,也符合高考评分的尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇标准~一起来学习下:

(1)改变时态
例如:The bell is ringing now. (一般)
There goes the bell! (高级)
(2)改变语态
例如:People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般)
It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高级)
(3)使用不定式
例如:He is so kind that he can help me.(一般)
He is so kind as to help me.(高级)
(4)使用过去分词
例如:① She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(一般)
Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.(高级)
② Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten.(一般)
Once seen, it can never be forgotten.(高级)
(5)使用V-ing形式
例如:① When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.(一般)
On arriving/his arrival, please give me an e-mail.(高级)
② If the weather permits, I'll come tomorrow.(一般)
I'll come tomorrow, weather permitting.(高级)
(6)使用名词性从句
例如:①It disappointed everybody that he didn't turn up.(一般)
The fact that he didn't turn up disappointed everybody.(高级)
②I happened to have met him.(一般)
It happened that I had met him.(高级)
③To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.(一般)
What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.(高级)www.cooyu.net
(7)使用定语从句
例如:The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written.(一般)
The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.(高级)
(8)使用状语从句
例如:① I won't believe what he says.(一般)
No matter what he says, I won't believe.(高级)
② If you come back before six o'clock, you can go out.(一般)
You can go out on condition that (provided that) you come back before six o'clock.(高级)
③ If she doesn't aGREe, what shall we do?(一般)
Supposing that she doesn't agree, what shall we do?(高级)
(9)使用虚拟语气
例如:① If you had taken my advice, you wouldn’t have failed in the exam. (高级)
② I wish it were spring all the year around. (高级)
③ He speaks English so fluently as if he had studied English in England. (高级)
(10)使用倒装句
例如:① The teacher didn’t come until he finished his homework. (一般)
Not until he teacher came did he finish his homework. (高级)
② I never shall do this again. (一般)
Never shall I do this again. (高级)
③ As though the chemistry homework was very difficult, it was finished in time. (一般)
Difficult as was the chemistry homework, it was finished in time. (高级)
(10)使用强调句型
例如:① Professor Lin teaches us English. (一般)
It is Professor Lin who teaches us English. (高级)
② I saw the film in Shanghai. (一般)
It was in Shanghai that I saw the film. (高级)

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