Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a sincere reader of your magazine and I especially like your column of the Movie Review. I therefore plan to place an order of your magazine for one year.I would be grateful if you are so kind as to render me with the following information.
Firstly,I wonder whether it is more cheaper to order the magazine on an annual basis than on usual?and how much are the fees I should pay for? Secondly,I also need to learn the situation recruiting VIP mumbers of your magazine club.Thirdly, I want to kown the ways of deliverity:by EMS or by other express deliverity?
Looking forward to hear form you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a sincere reader of your magazine and I especially like your column of the Movie Review. I therefore plan to place an order of your magazine for one year. I would be grateful if you are so kind as to render me with the following information.
Firstly, I wonder whether it is more（more不修饰比较级）cheaper to order the magazine on an annual basis than on usual? and（And）how much are the fees I should pay for? Secondly, I also need to learn the situation recruiting VIP mumbers（拼写错误） of your magazine club. Thirdly, I want to kown（拼写错误）the ways of deliverity（拼写错误）:（英语中用逗号） by EMS or by other express deliverity（拼写错误）?
Looking forward to hear form（拼写错误，from） you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
点评：7分
字数有点超。要注意单词的拼写。整体还是不错的。
