劳动最光荣为主题的社会实践活动(插图)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述整个过程。
注意:词数不少于60。
提示词:西瓜watermelon
[参考作文地带整理范文]
Last week I took part in a farmwork programme in the suburbs.
At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme “Working is most beautiful”. And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands.
When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip.
On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realised how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.
When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my parents. And they were very proud of me.
[解析]
本文属于图画作文,要求根据图画内容写一篇英文周记。
[详解]
假如你是红星中学高三学生李华,你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。要求根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述整个过程。分析四幅图可知,图画作文内容要点比较清晰,其中包括:老师宣布活动内容和意义,我为活动准备,在农场的劳动过程,介绍活动感受。这样有利于学生写作时发挥与扩展。全文可分成三部分,开头段概括活动,中间段描述图画,结尾段总结收获和意义。文章用第一人称来写,使用一般过去时。
Last week I took part in a farm work programme in the suburbs.
At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme "Working is most beautiful". And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands. When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip.
On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.
When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my parents.
And they were very proud of me.
推导逻辑：
1. 开篇引出话题：Last week I took part in a farm work programme in the suburbs.（对应写作任务引出话题需求）
2. 图一对应内容：At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme "Working is most beautiful". And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands.（结合图一班级场景，阐述活动主题传达）
3. 图二对应内容：When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip.【高分句型一】（结合图二家中收拾行李场景，展示准备过程）
4. 图三对应内容：On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.【高分句型二】（结合图三农田劳作场景，体现劳动体验与感悟）
5. 图四对应内容：When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my parents. And they were very proud of me.（结合图四家庭分享场景，呈现活动后续影响）
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