作文地带小编导读：《与浩初上人同看山寄京华亲故》为唐代文学家柳宗元的诗作。此诗表现了作者对故乡的深切思念之情，同时也表达了作者被贬谪的愤慨不平之意。前两句以剑喻山峰，谓其割人愁肠，“割”字照应上句“剑铓”的比喻，突出作者愁苦之深；后两句由峭拔似剑铓的群峰进一步产生出一个奇特的幻想，期望身化千亿，散上诸峰以望故乡。全诗因景生情，融情入景，想象奇特，比喻新颖，作者谪居的愁苦与望乡的悲哀在短短二十八字里表达得深挚感人，具有很强的艺术感染力。
《与浩初上人同看山寄京华亲故》 柳宗元
海畔尖山似剑芒，秋来处处割愁肠。
若为化得身千亿，散向峰头望故乡。
A Poem to Send to Friends in the Capital
Liu Zongyuan
Mountains by the seaside—sharp pointed swords:
when autumn comes, wherever I look, they stab my grieving heart.
If I could change into a million selves,
I'd send one to climb each peak and gaze far off toward home.
