星期六，我来到了一年级作文提高班，没一会儿，老师也来了．她一来，就怒气冲冲地对我说："高峰，你出去！"那话非常严厉，似乎容不得半点商量．我当时吓了一跳，心想：
On Saturday, I came to the first grade composition improvement class. Soon, the teacher also came. As soon as she came, she said to me angrily, "Gao Feng, you go out!" It was very harsh, and I couldn't seem to discuss it. I was shocked and thought:
咦？怎么回事？老师为什么叫我出去？我没犯什么错呀？
Why? What's going on? Why did the teacher ask me out? What's wrong with me?
我到了外面，老师俯下身来，对我讲："我这次想让同学们写一篇作文，让你做一下示范，委屈你了．"语气比刚才亲切了许多．我想：做什么示范呀？刚想问，老师就进了教室．我模模糊糊地听到老师让同学们回答什么问题，接着就听见同学们的一阵吵闹声，大约过了两三分钟，老师又让我进了教室.
When I got outside, the teacher leaned over and said to me, "I want my classmates to write a composition this time, and let you do a demonstration. I've wronged you." the tone was much more cordial than before. I thought: what demonstration? As soon as I wanted to ask, the teacher came into the classroom. I vaguely heard what questions the teacher asked the students to answer. Then I heard a noise from the students. After about two or three minutes, the teacher let me in again
一进教室，同学们就目不转睛地盯着我看，我很是不解。等我一转身，看到了黑板，才恍然大悟，原来黑板上写着几条题目，都是有关我的问题，比如"眼睛是双眼皮还是单眼皮？"、"穿什么颜色的裤子，鞋子又是什么颜色？"等等，这正是同学们盯着我看的原因。老师真是用心良苦啊！这时，老师转过身，在黑板上用红粉笔写下了一行醒目的大字：仔细观察、抓住重点，做一个有心人。是写好作文的关键之一。并要求我们要用心去记住这句话。
As soon as I entered the classroom, the students stared at me. I was puzzled. As soon as I turned around and saw the blackboard, I suddenly realized that there were several questions written on the blackboard, all about me, such as "is the eye double eyelid or single eyelid?" "What color are pants and shoes?" Wait, that's why the students stare at me. The teacher is really diligent! At this time, the teacher turned around and wrote a line of bold words on the blackboard with a red chalk pen: carefully observe, grasp the key points, and be a thoughtful person. It is one of the keys to write a good composition. And ask us to remember this sentence with our heart.
这堂作文课真有趣啊！
This composition class is so interesting!