五年级英语作文各单元写作要点与技巧
各单元写作要点
Unit1 我的老师/朋友
聚焦人物描写，用"be动词+外貌（tall/short/long hair）"和性格词（kind/strict/funny）。例："My math teacher is Miss Cheng. She is tall and thin, with big eyes. She's strict but kind."
Unit2 一周计划
按星期顺序写活动，用"On+星期, I have+科目/do+事情"。例："I like Mondays. We have PE and art. On weekends, I do homework and watch TV."
Unit3 食物喜好
用"My favourite food is... It's+形容词（delicious/healthy）"描述，可对比家人喜好。例："My father loves beef. He thinks it's yummy. I prefer fish—it's light and good for health."
Unit4 能力展示
用"I can+动词短语（sing/dance/play pingpong）"写会做的事，用"I can't+动词短语"写不会的。例："I can cook and wash clothes. But I can't play the piano or basketball."
Unit5 房间描写
用"There is/are+物品+位置"描述布局。例："My bedroom has a blue bed. Beside it, there's a desk with books and a computer. Two plants are near the window."
Unit6 自然公园/家乡
用"There be+景物（mountain/river/trees）"写自然景观。例："My village has a river. On it, there are ducks. Around the river, there are many flowers."
写作技巧：
1.5W1H逻辑：先想"Who（谁）/When（时间）/Where（地点）/What（做什么）/Why（原因）/How（方式）"，让内容完整。
2.简单句为主：多用"主语+be动词+描述"或"主语+动词+宾语"结构，避免复杂从句。
3.生活化词汇：用教材高频词（library/play basketball/happy），让内容更真实。
4.三步检查：
语法：主谓一致（She has...）、时态（一般现在时）。
细节：加颜色（a red hat）、数量（two apples）或感受（I feel happy）。
朗读：读一遍，删重复词，调整不通顺的句子。
My bedroom
"My bedroom is small but cozy. There's a pink bed with a teddy bear. Next to the bed, there's a white desk. On it, there are my storybooks and a lamp. A green plant is by the window. I love reading here. What's your room like?"
