2011年托福考试写作中常见50例病句(2)

2011-02-23托福作文

托福考试、雅思考试写作中常见50例病句

26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

28. What‘s about nonsmokers?

改进: What about nonsmokers?

29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

31. I am not good at maths, but English.

改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?

改进: Who is the proper person to plan children‘s leisure time?

33.It is children who clear about their interests.

改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

34. I agree the latter idea.

改进: I agree with the latter idea.

35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

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