作文地带导读：
影响高中生英语书面表达得分的几个因素：
1.是否灵活运用各种句型
2.是否使用高级词汇
3.结构是否清晰，行文是否连贯流畅
4.语篇信息是否完整, 有无多余
5 .卷面整洁,书写工整
检查结构是否清晰，行文是否连贯流畅：
过渡性词语是把在意义上相连贯的句子联接在一起的链条, 指出作者思维活动发展的方向。
1、First, Next, Then, Finally...
2、thus, therefore, however, in fact, besides,on the contrary, instead of
3. first, second, and, but, for, or
4. what’s more, as a result, what is better
5. as far as I know/am concerned; personally speaking
合理利用高级词汇或短语：
Family Planning is important, because it can help to control population growing.
=since=as=for
My teacher likes listening to the music.
=be in favor of =like=love=enjoy
灵活应用各种句型：
翻译：我认为举行超级女生比赛很有意义。(meaningful)
I think it is meaningful to hold the Super Girl competition.
1. 活用it 句型
(It 常用句型：
It is the first/ second…time that…
It is (high) time that…
It is said/ reported/ well-known that…
It takes sb. some time to do sth.
sb. feel/ find/ make/ think/ consider it +adj.+ to do)
翻译：李宇春在超级女生比赛中获得第一，这令她的歌迷们很兴奋．
Li Yuchun won the first prize in the Super Girl Competition, which made her fans excited.
2. 使用从句
翻译：我们只有通过努力才能获得成功。
Only by working hard can we be successful.
３. 倒装句型
是超级女生比赛让女孩们获得了自信(confidence)。
It is the Super Girl Competition that makes girls gain confidence.
４. 强调句型
翻译：有那么多的人支持超女比赛，这个活动很成功。
With so many people supporting the Super Girl Competition, it was a great success.
５. 注意with 结构的使用。
Homework
假如你叫李华，参加了学校开展的“有困难向谁求助”（Whom do you turn to when in trouble?）的调查活动，点差结果如下表。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信反映相关内容。
作文地带提示您注意：1. 内容要点全面，并表达出你的观点。为了使文章连贯，可适当增加内容。2. 词数：120词左右。
作文地带提示您注意：1. 内容要点全面，并表达出你的观点。为了使文章连贯，可适当增加内容。2. 词数：120词左右。
