
How to Deal with Our Study Problems(插图)
【写作要求】
某英语报开展“How to Deal with Our Study Problems”征文比赛,请你根据提示的内容,简要描述并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。
内容要点如下:
1. 尽管我们常常感到有压力,但是应该找到合适的方式来解压。可以选择穿像蓝色和白色一样的冷色调来使我们自己感到放松;2. 我们应该足够细心,因为“失之毫厘,谬以千里”;3. 也应该在课业和业余爱好之间取得平衡,试着安排好自己的空余时间;4. 任何时候都不要失去信心。通过努力学习,我们会取得大的进步。
How to Deal with Our Study Problems
如何应对学习中的问题
Although we often feel stressed, we should find suitable ways to deal with stress.
We can wear calm colours like blue and white to make us feel relaxed. We should be careful enough, because “a miss is as good as a mile”. We should also achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. Try to plan your spare time well. Don’t lose heart at any time. You will make great progress through hard work.
When having problems, we can ask people around us for help. It’s not wise to keep our worries to ourselves.
尽管我们常常感到压力,但我们还是应该找到合适的方法来应对压力。
我们可以穿蓝色、白色等让人平静的颜色,使自己放松。我们要足够细心,因为“差之毫厘,谬以千里”。我们还应该在学业和爱好之间取得平衡。试着好好规划你的业余时间。任何时候都不要气馁。通过努力,你会取得很大的进步。
遇到问题时,我们可以向身边的人求助。把烦恼都憋在心里是不明智的。
作文地带优化后的英文版本:
How to Deal with Our Study Problems
如何应对学习中的问题
Although we often feel stressed, we should find suitable ways to deal with it.
We can wear calm colors like blue and white to help us relax. We should also be careful enough, because “a miss is as good as a mile.” In addition, we need to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. Try to plan your spare time well. Don’t lose heart at any time, and you will make great progress through hard work.
When we have problems, we can ask people around us for help. It is not wise to keep our worries to ourselves.
注:主要改动包括:
第二句 “deal with stress” 改为 “deal with it” 避免重复。
“colours” 美式拼写 “colors” 可统一(也可保留英式,无伤大雅)。
增加 “also” 使并列更自然,并在谚语后加句号。
第二段最后两句用 “and” 连接,使语气更连贯。
“When having problems” 改为 “When we have problems” 更清晰。
详细解析:
1. 内容与结构
文章分为三个层次:
第一句(总起):承认压力存在,提出要寻找合适方法。
中间部分(具体方法):
外在调节:穿平静颜色的衣服。
态度层面:细心(引用谚语)、平衡学业与爱好、规划时间、不气馁、努力。
结尾(求助意识):向他人求助,不要独自承受。
整体结构清晰,从个人调节到外部支持,逻辑合理。
2. 语言优点
使用了谚语 “a miss is as good as a mile”,增加文采和教育意义。
祈使句(Try, Don’t lose heart)直接有力,适合建议类短文。
最后一句 “It’s not wise to keep our worries to ourselves” 表达地道。
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