年岁渐长,临近毕业,青少年需要在生活中不断提高自我管理能力。请以“Learning to Manage Our Own Lives”为题,用英语写一篇小短文向校刊的School Life 英文专栏投稿。
写作要点:
(1)自我管理的重要性。
(2)列举生活中见到的自我管理薄弱的现象。
(3)提出提高自我管理能力的建议。(至少两条建议)
(4)发出提高自我管理能力的号召。
注意:
(1)内容必须包括所有的要点。
(2)可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
(3)文中不得透露个人信息。
(4)词数80左右。(短文首尾句已给出,不计入总词数)
Learning to Manage Our Own Lives
It’s reported that we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives these days. ___________________
In a word, if we learn to manage our lives from now on, we will have a better future.
范文:
Learning to Manage Our Own Lives
It’s reported that we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives these days. We can’t deal with difficulties by ourselves. So it’s important for us to learn to manage our own lives.
For me, I seldom did housework in the past, because I thought it is our parents’ work. This is a wrong opinion. We should learn to do housework like sweeping the floor and taking out the rubbish. I hardly cooked either. When my mother was on business, I realized I must learn to cook by myself. After that, I find that cooking is not as difficult as it seems.
So no matter what I do in the future, I will make a plan and complete it in strict accordance with the plan. At the same time, I take the initiative to help others do something. Let’s improve our self-management ability in life together!
In a word, if we learn to manage our lives from now on, we will have a better future.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意自行补充两条提高自我管理能力的建议,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体阐述自我管理很重要;
第二步,列举在生活中自我管理能力薄弱的现象,并根据自身问题提出合理化建议;
第三步,号召大家提高自我管理能力。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②at the same time同时
③take the initiative采取主动
④help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①So it’s important for us to learn to manage our own lives.(It’s+形容词+for sb.+to do sth.)
②So no matter what I do in the future, I will make a plan and complete it in strict accordance with the plan.(no matter what引导让步状语从句)