“双减政策”下,你发生了哪些变化?请根据以下提示,给你的外国友人Tom写封信,介绍“双减”以来你的变化,并谈谈你对这些变化的看法。
要点提示:
1、你的学习生活都发生了变化。
2、作业量变少了,课外补习变少了,学校文体活动增多了……
3、你的感受。
要求:
1、主旨明确,用词准确,逻辑清晰,行文连贯。
2、词数:90词左右。
3、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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参考LIUXUEPAPER.COM范文:
Dear Tom,
Since the “double reduction” policy was carried out, my school life has been changed a lot.
First of all, I have less homework than before and I’m required to finish my homework all at school, which means there are no more school assignments at home. Secondly, the most exciting thing for me is that I don’t need to take off-campus tutoring classes any more. Finally, I have more spare time to do things I enjoy. I can play basketball with my friends after school or I can join the music club in our school. I can sing songs, play the piano and play the guitar in it.
All in all, the “double reduction” policy has changed my school life and I love the “double reduction” policy.
Yours,
Li Hua
总体分析:
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍“双减”以来你的变化,可适当增加细节。
写作步骤:
第一步,引出话题,表示自己有很多变化;
第二步,根据提示内容详细介绍“双减”以来自己发生的变化;
第三步,介绍自己的感受。
亮点词汇:
①carry out执行;
②all in all总的来说。
高分句型:
①Since the “double reduction” policy was carried out, my school life has been changed a lot.(since引导的时间状语从句);
②I have less homework than before and I’m required to finish my homework all at school, which means there are no more school assignments at home.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)。