七年级的学习生活已经结束了,学校英语俱乐部特邀你写一篇英语短文,给新一届的七年级新生提几点建议。
内容要点如下:
1.初中科目更多,好的学习方法很重要;
2.锻炼身体,早睡早起,吃健康的食物,保持健康;
3.参加社团活动,使校园生活更有趣;
4.多读书,多交朋友;
5.……
要求:
1.参考提示语,可适当发挥,语言流畅,词数不少于60个(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上,如在本卷上作答,一律不得分。
Dear younger schoolmates,
I am glad to share some of my ideas to help you have a good beginning in your middle school life.
作文地带整理答案解析:
Dear younger schoolmates,
亲爱的同学们:
I am glad to share some of my ideas to help you have a good beginning in your middle school life.(点题)
我很高兴分享我的一些想法,以帮助你们在接下来的中学生活中有一个良好的开端。
First of all,there are more subjects in the middle school,so it is important to have good learning strategies.Second,a good body means everything.You'd better do some exercise and keep early hours.You also need to eat healthy food to keep in good health.What's more,you should join the clubs.There are many meaningful activities.It's a good way to make your school life more colorful.
首先,中学的科目比较多,所以要有好的学习策略。第二,好身材意味着一切。你还需要吃健康的食物来保持身体健康。更重要的是,你应该加入俱乐部。有许多有意义的活动。
Last but not least,reading more books and making new friends in your free time are better ideas to enrich your horizon.(建议)
最后但并非最不重要的一点是,在空闲时间多读书和结交新朋友是丰富视野的更好主意。
There might be some difficulties in your new school life.I wish you could enjoy the happy time here.(希望)
你的新学校生活可能会遇到一些困难。我希望你能在这里享受快乐的时光。
七年级的学习生活已经结束了,学校英语俱乐部特邀你写一篇英语短文,给新一届的七年级新生提几点建议。
范文二:
Welcome to our school!
I will graduate from my school.Therefore I'd like to share something with you.
Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school,it is important for you to have your own study methods.
【高分句型一】(初中科目更多,好的学习方法很重要;)
In order to be better at study,you must do more exercise to keep healthy【高分句型二】.(锻炼身体,保持健康)
Secondly,you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time.
(参加社团活动,使学校生活丰富)
In other words,please keep balance between school life and study.In addition,it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books.
(多读书,多交朋友;)
At last,if you have problems in school life,please talk with your teachers or parents.They are always there waiting for you.
(个人想法)
I hope you will have a wonderful school life.
点评:
这是一篇给材料作文,自己即将毕业,给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议.结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时,人称为第一,第二人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Therefore I'd like to…,it is important for you to…,you can…,it is a good choice to…,I hope you will…等句式的应用.写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用.写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,完整地表达出提纲中所列内容。
Liuxuepaper.Com分析 :
【高分句型一】
it is important for you to have your own study methods对于你们来说有自己的学习方法是重要的.
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的,it是形式主语,动词不定式做真正主语.
【高分句型二】
In order to be better at study,you must do more exercise to keep healthy为了学习更好,你要多做锻炼去保持健康.
in order to do sth为了做某事,做目的状语.